Note to reader: This is a very different type poem for me, but it is how I received it yesterday as I was taking my chemo infusion, watching the squirrels at the bird feeder. It is in free verse. The first two stanzas have 7 lines, the next two 6 lines, the next two five and so on. I would appreciate any comments you might have.
Watching a squirrel
Dangling
By his toes
Barely holding on
Trusting his grip
On the wire
Holding the bird feeder
Eating the seeds
Meant for the birds
Not for him
He doesn’t care
Whose food it us
It’s his
Today
Reminds me
Of the thief
Who comes
To steal
Steal our lives
Not meant for him
Meant for God
Our creator
Our provider
Our protector
Our deliverer
Our Savior
We open the door
To the enemy
Allow him in
Unwittingly
Open the door
To God
Let Him in
Willingly
The enemy
Will steal
God’s blessings
God
Will restore
What the enemy steals
Resist
The enemy
Run
To God
Be
Blessed
Bless you for sharing this…well done to the glory of God! 🙂
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I like! Praise to our King. (from South Africa)
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Amen
Praise Him!
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I love this! 🙂 ♥
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